Six Sentence Sunday 10/28 Edition

Slowly pressing Gabrielle’s body against the tree, she said, “You’re breathing really fast.”
“I know.”
“Are you scared?”
“So your completely calm right now?”
“I never said that.”

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  1. Love the dialogue! Calm and scared are two very different things! So what is she feeling? Great six!

  2. Lovely six.

  3. Ha, awesome six. 🙂

  4. Sounds so cool. Has to be hiding something Find Kristal Here

  5. Love the tension in these six. They are a pretty simple as a dialogue but I feel the intensity in the conversation. Thanks for sharing.

  6. Hawt 6! Left me wanting more! 😀

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